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General Library: Voyeur by VO1
Fandom: | Sailormoon |
Rating: | NC17 |
Created: | 2009-03-29 |
Genre: | Romance |
Updated: | 2009-03-29 |
Style: | General |
Status: | Complete |
Setting: | Alternate Universe |
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Summary:
Serenity in the SM has some questions, and not the kind you ask out loud. There's only one way to find out. Very NC17.
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Review by Loki |
2009-04-08
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Very sexy. I must say this was a hot piece of writing, I really enjoyed it.
The descriptions were good, the only thing I did not like were the 'off-of's' you inserted, slang terms that detracted frm the erotically charged power of this piece.
It was not too mechanical as some people write sex descriptions like a description of open heart surgery, only the 'in and out, was a little that way, but the majority of the piece was smooth, ornate and steamy, just as I like... (more) |
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