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Review by waterflu 2007-02-25

A very heart warming story. Normally, I don't like Chibi Usa/Helios fics, but yours is really sweet and short, which makes me want to read more stories like that.

I really liked this part: "“My lady,” he replied, “I trust you with my life. But when it comes to peaking, snooping, surprises, and gifts, you are your mother’s child.”" It made me love Helios!

Overall, good job!


Author's response:

I'm glad.

I've never been a realy Chibi-Usa fan myself but I've always thought that a great proposal would be at Christmas time and what better place to get asked than in your dreams.

That is my favorite line of the story too, next to Venus at the end.

I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you for reviewing!
Review by Araya 2007-02-25

Waterflu took the words out of my mouth! =-P I have to agree with her on everything! (Especially the quote, I was teary eyed I was laughing so hard.)

Each character was dead on and your descriptions were beautiful. I could picture Elysian perfectly.

Your work is exceptionally beautiful and I hope to read more from you ASAP!

Author's response:

Aw. :) Thank you. I'm glad that I was able to do Elysian justice. I didn't want to go overboard with the descriptions and it is so easy to when really want the reader to see what you see.

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.


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