Review by waterflu |
2007-02-25
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A very heart warming story. Normally, I don't like Chibi Usa/Helios fics, but yours is really sweet and short, which makes me want to read more stories like that.
I really liked this part: "“My lady,” he replied, “I trust you with my life. But when it comes to peaking, snooping, surprises, and gifts, you are your mother’s child.”" It made me love Helios!
Overall, good job!
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Author's response:
I'm glad.
I've never been a realy Chibi-Usa fan myself but I've always thought that a great proposal would be at Christmas time and what better place to get asked than in your dreams.
That is my favorite line of the story too, next to Venus at the end.
I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you for reviewing!
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