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Reviews on Art of Sexual War by Starsea
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Review by shetan83 |
2010-11-10
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Wow. *laughs* What a game of one-upmanship. At least in this case, everyone's a winner.
This might sound odd, but I love the way you write smut. The smut is so intense precisely because of your characterizations and attention to emotion. Well done.
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Review by Jessica Pendragon |
2007-03-08
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If she ever got married and got over all that lovely drama stuff, I can completely see Rei acting like she did in this story. It was really powerful how you kept her in character and interpreting how she would act in this situation.
And it was easy to relate with because there is always this little battle of psychology going on in relationships, I think it was a great use of the theme. And of course, I love your one liners and description, especially:
"the piano is made of rosewood that looks as if there is a fire in the heart of the grain." I loved that one! ^_^
Good job again, Starsea!
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Author's response:
Heh, thanks. The plotting definitely felt right to me: it's so typical of them to try and outsmart each other when it would be easier to be honest. And yes, there are many small psychological battles that go on, even in the most peaceful relationships.
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Review by Bella*Luna |
2007-03-06
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I love your stories. I love the way that you portray your characters. There is always such passion between them, believable but not over the top.
Really good job. ^.^
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Author's response:
Thank you, Shel! I tried hard to make the emotions feel 'real'. And hey, with these two, passion of some sort is always guaranteed.
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