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Critique by Anonymous 2006-03-10

I think its beautiful, and I ADORE the hair.

Only one minor thing, her lips are a little to close to her nose, and there is a long gap after that for the chin area, my suggestion is lowering the lips just a little, and taking some of the area of the chin off so that there isn't so much there.

Other then that, I don't see much else to critique =D

Artist's response:

Thank you. ^^

I photoshopped the lips down as far as I could without making the nose look goofy, but there isn't a lot I can do about the chin. I will keep both those tips in mind, however, in my next picture. Thank you.

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