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General Library: Tripping Toward the Morn by wickedtrue


Fandom:Sailormoon
Rating:PG Created:2009-10-21
Genre:Drama Updated:2010-02-28
Style:General Status:Incomplete
Setting:Canon
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Stumble (PHP)
Fall (PHP)



Summary:

"Do you ever think about it?"

"It." Rei repeated to herself. She sipped her tea. "Mina-chan, I've told you. I can't read your mind. It's too empty."

"The Silver Millennium." Minako let her head fall back to the table. Rei stayed quiet, letting Minako work out her more specific thoughts. "Our past. Who we were. Were we…do you think we're the same people from before? Are we different? Are…are we going to be the people we were again, once we're older?"


Author's Comments:

A prequel to Normal Enough. It helps to read them together, but both are pretty stand alone. Another study on what it might be like for the characters to start remembering their past lives. I love this time period of the series. It has so much potential!

The first two chapters focus on Minako: she is beginning to remember the past through her dreams that are slowly taking over her waking life.




 Reviews: 1
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Review by Loki 2009-10-26

This is an excellent mosaic of memory and its inter-meshing with the present

Knit-picks: Two *woman* (women) across the way, dialogue tags are far more effective than misusing punctuation as !! or combo's like !? etc; these grammatically flawed. Only one last observation with a sentence, where you had, 'give' and should have been, 'gave' tense-wise. But that was it, on the whole beautifully presented.

Highlights:

This ficlet was really clever, imagina... (more)


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