General Library: Sol Salvation by Adrian Tyndall

Rating:PG13 Created:2006-07-04
Genre:Romance Updated:2008-02-18
Style:General Status:Incomplete
Setting:Alternate Universe

Prologue (Text)


After an argument that costs her her relationship with Michiru, Haruka comes across a man from another world, and her world begins to change. The Senshi soon become involved as a creature who is hunting this man down begins to revive the deadliest enemies they've ever faced.

Author's Comments:

This is not intended as a put-down on homosexuality in any way.

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Review by Loki 2006-08-20

I am most intrigued by this offering

Firstly, I noticed a few minor flaws, typos here and there, the odd grammar issue, but over-all it was very good, I would suggest expanding vocabulary in descriptive dialogue be careful of repetition with words -- I noticed this especially at the beginning. The only thing that bugged me was the _Alright_ this is a short-hand that is most annoying and the correct form is, all right.


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