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General Library: Unsaid by Dave Ziegler


Fandom:The Melancholy of Suzumiya Haruhi
Rating:PG13 Created:2007-02-22
Genre:General Updated:2007-02-22
Style:General Status:Complete
Setting:Canon
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  2006 Winter Challenge Entry (Theme: Holidays)



Summary:

Kyon is less than pleased when Haruhi drags him out on Christmas Eve for a ‘mandatory party.’ The SOS Brigade does not take breaks. His mood fouls hers, and soon things look less than their holiday best. In a case of misunderstood intentions, can Kyon and Haruhi find honesty in one another’s actions; or will they fall victim to what’s been left unsaid?


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Written for the .Moon Winter Challenge 2006-07.


 Reviews: 2
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Review by Kihin Ranno 2007-04-08

I'm going to be honest; I wasn't a big fan of this story when it was in the contest. Kyon's point of view just didn't work for me because it just seemed... so overdone.

Then of course I saw the series and everything made sense.

Kyon is definitely spot on in this fic, 'alas' and all. And the gift at the end is much more satisfying now. I really like it now that I understand what he and Haruhi are all about. ^^ Well done!
Review by Bella*Luna 2007-02-26

I thought that this was the sweetest story ever. It was very adorable. What I was most impressed with was, though I don't know the fandom, it didn't feel like it mattered. You told the story in a way that someone who doesn't know what you are talking about could catch on quite easily.

Great job.


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