General Library: The Scouts Have Returned. by PromiseMe

Rating:PG13 Created:2007-05-14
Genre:General Updated:2007-05-16
Style:General Status:Incomplete
Setting:Alternate Universe

The Past Three Years. (PHP)


Three years ago after the defeat of Galaxia,Darien Broke up with Serena and that led to the separation of the Sailor Scouts. Two years after that Serena is left all alone because her family was killed in a car accident. Now a year later their needed again

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Review by ruminant 2007-06-07

I think you have an interesting idea here. If the girls were split up for 3 years and then had to come back together to fight a new enemy, what would happen?

There are some grammar issues in your story. There is a thread in the Board here under The Writer's Block that has Beta Readers in it. Beta Readers are great for catching mistakes.

Also, Rei says the girls, "left without even saying good bye to one another" and then she says, "she wouldn't even talk to any o... (more)

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