|
Review by Bella*Luna |
2008-07-21
|
-Hope Like Smoke:
I really liked the fact that you used actual canon to help set your AU canon up. ^_^
-Hope, I Understand:
I'm really loving the way you're presenting Oliver. All confused and amused by his emotions because, dang it, this is ridiculous. ^_^
I enjoy their banter, how comfortable she is with him (even though she barely knows him....).
I feel like you're using the word 'lass' a lot. But it's hard to decided since Oliver didn'... (more) |
|
