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Review by sarahkins87 |
2008-06-18
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Beautifully written! I loved it, so sad but I just couldn't stop myself from continuing.
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Review by Anonymous |
2007-08-20
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This story is incredibly haunting, leaving an everlasting impression on you. You don't want to read on but you have to. The deaths, tragedies, and losses bring immense sorrow, but you have to read this story. It's a short read, but tells a story in such a way that no one else can. The description is immaculate, leaving me depressed and sobbing throughout the story. This story feels real, and portrays the end of King Endymion and Neo-Queen Serenity perfectly. Please read.
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Review by Araya |
2006-10-10
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This is one of the most beautiful and well written stories that I have written in a long time. The transition between the two plot lines is very well done. All in all, this story melts your heart and really brings out a varity of emotions. Very good job. :)
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Review by Sokudo Ningyou |
2005-12-29
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Ah, the sadness. I like the cruel irony of peacetime. I have no idea how it was revised, as I never read the original version, but it flows well from scene to scene.
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Author's response:
Don't read the original version. It's the corniest thing on the net. ;P
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Review by ruminant |
2005-10-23
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This fic seriously made me cry. The transitions between the two possibilities was well done. This was such an emotional work.
The writing is sensitive and smooth. The characters are true to themselves in both realities.
I recommend this story to everyone to read.
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