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Review by Jessica Pendragon 2008-01-28

“And then there’s Minako,” Motoki concluded, his smile eerily wide. Mamoru thought it must be exceptionally painful. “She… she doesn’t even really have standards, right?”

haha, poor Minako. =P

Liked it, of course. It was a very real scenario, and I'm sure 2384927 of people have done that. I don't think I would have thought to put Mokot in that position, but it fits with the way you present it.

Yeah, I leave you mostly unconstructive reviews...just deal with it.

Author's response:

Motoki has fallen for the Minako-facade! :O Oh noes!

I'm glad you find it realistic. While I was writing it, I was like, "I think I'm probably the only person who would do this, and that's just cause I like lists so much."

I'll take unconstructive - but only because I'm an attention whore.


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