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Review by Bella*Luna 2008-04-17

"In that moment he wondered if winter grieves as it murders the beauty of the world."

Do you have any idea how much I wish that I had thought of this? So beautiful.

I love the fact that he recognizes the circle that has come about as he reaches his demise. It is beautiful yet tragic at the same time.

I love it!

Author's response:

Geeze nobody liked this when I put it up on smmfc. ^^; Thanks Shel!
Review by Araya 2008-04-15

This is such a short yet beautiful vignette. I love your descriptions and how you take this brutal fight between Jupiter and Nephrite and compare it to something much bigger, yet still has the potential to be just as deadly. It truly is a circle, spring always over comes winter, and good always overcomes evil. However, the latter always returns, and thus, the cycle goes on.

Love it!

Author's response:

I think you looked into more than I did. hehe =P I'm glad it could inspire some critical thinking for being so short. Thanks Araya!
Review by ShadowBlade 2008-04-14

This is beautiful, yet i can't help but feel like she is having similar thoughts.

Author's response:

She just might, who knows? :) Thanks for reviewing, glad you liked it!


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