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Comments on Quiet and Cool by Nephthys Moon

Review by Araya

2008-08-15

I really loved how you were able to capture and bring to life such a minor character in the books. Viktor's infatuation with Hermione always intrigued me and this little vignette was refreshing and flowed nicely. I love how you incorporated his attraction to her through her tendency to look beyond fame and the part about Harry just cracked me up. This was a perfect missing moment. A few mistakes but nothing to major. Loved it!

Review by Bella*Luna

2008-08-12

I like this.

I've never thought on Viktor following her because of his interest...maybe I just thought that it had fallen into their laps. Hmm.

It has always made me happy to think of people longing for Hermione, especially since she doesn't think very much of herself in way of looks or personality.

There were two errors that I could see (words missing in sentences) and if you want those let me know. But very good otherwise.

^_^ Good job Kasey.

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