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Review by bin82501 |
2008-12-25
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Honestly you should have a monopoly on Kunzite and Minako characterizations. Truly beautiful. You're a fantastic writer.
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Author's response:
Thank you very much! ^^; I think monopoly is a bit of a stretch, but there certainly needs to be more of it out there!
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Review by Anonymous |
2008-12-22
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ooh I love it! Such great imagery. I can totally see Venus doing that with the light. It seems just the right amount of whimiscal and sad. Very well done!
-V
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Author's response:
Thank you so much! I'm pleased you enjoyed and that the imagery was up to par. Description's not my forte. ^^; Thanks again!
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Review by chenoadawn |
2008-12-21
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I liked it. The insomnia, the wandering... even though I had a good idea how it would end it was still a surprise. The use of the siren song was brilliant!
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Author's response:
You have helped to stem back the whine and woe! :D
It may have been a surprise because I was pretty sure I was going to hold off on having them make out, but then I couldn't figure out a better way to get her out of there. ^^;
I'm happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for reviewing!
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Review by Starsea |
2008-12-21
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It's a wonderful piece, full of what makes these two such a great couple: the meeting of minds, the mutual teasing, the wariness of their position, the recognition of souls. I loved the way you showed this by how the light closed over them and was full of colour. Of course she can't help kissing him but she hates to be out of control and she hates that he's the one who does it because he's too much like her. :) Fascinating ending, I want to know more! I always love your V/K stories.
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Author's response:
I should always whine for reviews. xD
I'm so thrilled you like it. :D I've had this in mind ever since I first saw that picture, and I'm thrilled I got to write it in time. And I am actually writing a sequel to it as we speak. It's going to be epic though - 1,500 words in and Venus hasn't even made an appearance.
There will also be smut as SMMFC is sorely lacking in pr0n as of late.
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