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Review by Loki |
2006-08-21
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A cascade of shadow and affect
Again I am impressed by your writing. It is raw, passionate and deadly with a sprinkling of something deper -- hard to identify -- closeness without intimacy? Passion that contrasts the swiftness of the blade and of darker purposes. Sakura has a sense of the other in her lover -- it reminds me of the struggles some people, who are not Ninja, will in their own way, interact with one another in matters of love and desire -- thought provoking. Some minor flaws and typos, but a proofing will fix these. *hands you a crystal blade entwined in a Sakura bloomand bows* L.
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