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Review by Dave Ziegler |
2006-06-20
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I have many completely unconstructive things to say about 'Thrice-Blessed.' The dialogue is real and genuine; it feels like something someone actually says rather than something someone writes on a page. The prose is solid; it's both descriptive and direct. The grammar is flawless from what I can tell, which is rather refreshing. The characterization is spot on, and it's a pleasure to read A) a Rei character piece that's not focused on her unwavering and somewhat tormenting love for Usagi and Mamoru, and B) a Rei character piece that mildly examines her relationship with a Senshi other than Ami. And finally, the concept is deftly executed and integrated; it shows a thorough understanding of both the characters and Shakespeare's verse.
Getting right down to it, the story is all around fantastic and an enjoyable read.
So yeah, my apologies for the near complete lack of anything helpful or constructive to offer. I do believe there is a typo in the following sentence, however:
>>But the fact is that I’m only here because ojii-san wanted to get rid of me, and this was the most convenient way to do that.
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Author's response:
Thanks, Dave! Your reviews are always thoughtful and detailed, so it's a real pleasure to know that you enjoyed this story and couldn't find anything to criticise.
I studied "A Midsummer Night's Dream" twice in my school years, so it made sense to pick something from that particular play, especially given Rei's tense relationship with her father. I also think that she and Hermia have a lot in common when it comes to personality. Minako isn't very much like Helena, though! These two have a special relationship in the manga, so I wanted to explore that.
Thanks for pointing out the typo. It's been corrected. :)
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