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Review by Loki |
2009-03-18
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As the Dark serpant curls in upon itself, the fabric of subspace reveals the forge we cannot see, the essence of the Dark Light Paradox, Chaos, Wiseman and Galaxia, stars and power, love dreams and hope, shackled to one point of reference, we undo our own lattices of stars and galaxies, weaving the tomorrows we dare not visualize, for in doing so we must give up soomething, and that something is long given, and is always redeemed and in perpetuity is not as we remember it and is a mosaic of mysteries that await the time we find ourselves upon a different shore.
Dark but powerful, and yet I could see her, hope in pandora's Box was there all along.
Tech-side, a few too many ellipses and the stray punctuation multiple, but that was it. Otherwise the depth of the piece is impressive, and though it takes the reader to the point of oblivion, new growth is also present. Excellent work.
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Author's response:
This was the essence of a darkfic, so each ellipsis is something of me calling out from the darkness I was lost in at the time. On the bright side... it led to "Chaos Theory", and that's a good thing.
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