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Review by Bella*Luna 2006-09-30

That was......beautiful. There is no other word that can describe the powerful way that you explained what happened in this story.

An inovative and original idea....very eleoquent in your explaination of the feelings and sensations that occur during the encounter. The words you chose made me as the reader feel happy, made me feel a piece of the calm and excited feelings that Venus was experiencing through Mars and then through herself.

Very well written. Very beautiful.
Review by Krysia 2006-09-29

I love the idea behind this fic. This is one of those ideas that I wish I would have thought of myself and I will curse you to the end of my days...

;)

Not only was it an awesome idea, but you were able to explain and portray it in an eloquent way.
Review by Starsea 2006-09-29

One of the most original stories I've read in BSSM fanfiction, "Full Circle" addresses the powers of Venus, which are less tangible than those of the other senshi. It takes Venus's habit of keeping her weakness a secret from the other senshi, which was established during the Dream arc of the manga, and places it right in the future. Venus's doubt, jealousy and pain are well evoked, as is the concern of Mars. The encounter between them is extremely sensuous, which is logical given Venus's powers, but it doesn't become sensual. It was nice to give Artemis a mention right at the end of the story, his presence was rather lacking before that and I think he would still be an important part of Venus's life, despite the changes.

An interesting and thought-provoking meditation on power, personality and friendship.


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