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Review by Anonymous 2013-06-16

This was a phenomenal little vignette, and a truly unique take on the birth of Crystal Tokyo. I think you conveyed the emotions one might feel in such upheaval with depth, deftness, and accuracy. Great Job!
Review by Anonymous 2013-01-14

That hits the target dead center! Great awsner!
Review by Jaded Catalyst 2007-01-28

This is one of my favorites. You always wonder if a paradise is really all its worked up to be. Personally, I don't think it is. This story is a perfect portrayl of that. A paradise can never truly exist because there will always be at least one person that is unhappy. That's just the way it is.

I can't begin to describe how this story makes me feel. It's almost like a reflection to what I tell my friends whenever they come to me for help. "If everything went the way you think it should then it would be boring."

Excellent work.
Review by elianthos 2006-12-04

ah, joy!

This is one of my top favs on fanfiction.net too.

It just feels right: the way you dealt with this issue, the protagonist and the person helping her to sort/share her feelings. I always thought those two have a lot more in common than shown in canon, and I'm glad atalented authors such as you handled their interaction so well. *claps hands*
Review by ruminant 2006-01-24

This is a nice exploration of Makoto's feelings about the emergence of Crystal Tokyo. No normal girl (and the senshi ARE normal girls at heart) would be fine with losing their everyday identity and replacing it with a soldier's identity. It would take time to adjust to it.

I don't want to give away who Makoto has her conversation with, but I think it was the best character to chose. The person is much like Makoto and they share similar histories. He/She was a good choice.
Review by Kihin Ranno 2006-01-10

Love this, love this, love this. It's so perfect for their last night. I am fuming with envy, just so you know.


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