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Review by Bella*Luna 2007-03-28

This is great. The quotes are perfect. I love how it seems like someone is telling the story yet no one is. The questions make them human, but the faith of the people makes them extraordinary and how they carry that faith makes them goddesses, saviors of their time. They fear that very faith may be their downfall.

AHH, it's so wonderful I can't stand it. Great job!
Review by Araya 2007-03-26

The strength of this piece is how real you portray the senshi to be, how lifelike their emotions are. They arn't gods like the people portray them to be but average women who wish to be anything but what they are.


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