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Reviews on Through a Veil Darkly by Nephthys Moon
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Review by Anonymous |
2007-09-10
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WOW! This story is so beautiful; I absolutely love the combination of worlds and characters. And I love what you did at the end; you put so much emotion into a short space. The fact that Sirius chose not to ask because he knew he had to try to return is even more tragic than him not asking because he didn't think it was a possibility. He knew it might be, and he still didn't ask... and Setsuna knew he wouldn't. I can't get over how sad that is, and it's amazing how much that says about his character. Sirius is always doomed by his own character flaws. *sighs and sobs* You are no longer allowed to say you don't write Marauders. :) Thanks so much for this beautiful story! *hugs*
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Review by Bella*Luna |
2007-09-09
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I like it!
I like the fact that you answer what happens to Sirius in the Veil without allowing him to 'come back to life' like so many fans wanted. I also like the fact that you insinuated that Pluto had been watching Sirius and was hoping that he might opt to become her companion, even though she knew what would happen in the end.
Now, I remember us talking about this a little when you started writing and how you were worried about it feeling rushed. I think that you did an excellent job of preventing it from jumping to the end too quickly. You kept them both in character and allowed them to act as they would in the situation.
It is really good. Nice job Kase. ^.^
•Shel
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Author's response:
*hugs*
Thanks so much! I tried really hard, and Christine yelled at me a lot for rushing things towards the end. I am glad it came across so well!
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