This is a great one-shot but you could write a second chapter with the development of their relation. Great work!
Review by sulou
2008-05-13
I think I would be interested in reading what happens after he decides to, er, "claim" her. What would happen to Yahiko and how he would handle this, as well as how Kaoru would handle "belonging" to someone like that.
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