Poetry Corner: Spirituality by Bella*Luna

Fandom:Original Fiction Rating:G
Created:2008-10-02 Modified:2008-10-06
Summary:Talking to God?

I donít know if Youíre listening
If Youíre truly there
I donít know if You can hear me
If You even care
It is true that Iím a skeptic
Perhaps I shouldnít waste my time
But someone said that speaking to You
Might make everything feel fine
I donít believe in Your sins
Or that Iíll be saved if I repent
I donít believe that a Fatherís forgiveness
Is truly Heaven sent
I donít feel that the preacher
Knows You personally
And can tell me how to live
And what kind of person I should be
What I do believe is that You are a friend
Someone that will listen when I am in need
Someone that will look on, not judging
Believing that I am infected with sinís seed
What I believe is that You are an unbiased source
Not corrupted by society
True, honest, pure inspiration
Sent to those who are trying to see
You donít have to be worshiped in a church
You donít have to be worshiped at all
All You need is the faith of people
To remain pure and strong
I donít believe in religion
I donít believe in organized faith
I believe in spirituality
And the choices that each person makes
I donít have to see You
To believe that You are there
But I do have to be able to have faith on my own terms
In order to believe that You truly care

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Review by Araya 2008-10-06

This is really beautiful and it really hits home for those who are struggling with religious concepts. For the most part, it flows really beautifully but i... (more)

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