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Poetry Corner: Come With Me by cwiddy


Fandom:Original Fiction Rating:G
Created:2008-11-10 Modified:2008-11-10
Summary:Semi-spiritual (Christian) Poem
Come With Me

Come with me and take my hand,
Iíll lead you then to the promised land.
Open up your heart real wide,
There within I will abide.

Raise your voice high in the night,
Iíll listen and Iíll bring you light.
All is heard and answered right,
Though some requires a little fight.

So come with me and take my hand,
Together we can take a stand.
Open up your mind real wide,
And life lessons there will abide.

Stand up for good and righteous things,
Rewards of thanks this often brings.
If not here in this life now,
Then in the next, that is my vow.

So come with me and take my hand,
Iíll lead you then to the promised land.



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Review by laceymoibella 2008-11-17

Very touching poem.

Brilliantly written.

~Lacey


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