General Library: The Dream of Unreflected Sufferings by blue

Rating:PG13 Created:2006-01-10
Genre:Dark Updated:2006-01-19
Style:Character Study Status:Complete

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Michiru wakes up to a life she does not remember having lived... (or did she only live a life she does not wish to remember)?

Author's Comments:

It's a bit of drama, mystery and angst...

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Review by Loki 2006-08-21

I was impressed by your alternate scenario for Michiru

I was amazed by the complexity of this powerful piece of writing. Some flaws, typos, spelling and some grammar and expression to be proofed and edited. But over-all, the power of this ficlet is outstanding. Well done!

I love your use of language, the world building skills and use of imagery, you used so well to punctuate the moment, to deliver pathos and the inner termoil michiru had gone through. but even in t... (more)

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