General Library: Bloody Mary by Bella*Luna

Fandom:Original Fiction
Rating:R Created:2008-03-13
Genre:Dark Updated:2008-07-31
Style:General Status:Complete

Bloody Mary (PHP)


One possible explanation for things that go bump in the night.

Author's Comments:

I wrote this when I was in the 8th grade, so 1999... I've updated it a bit, but mostly stayed true to the original story and my original writing style. It was my first completed story and, no matter what is wrong with it, I'm very proud of it. Hope you guys like it. ^_^

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Review by Araya 2008-03-17

Ohhhh... bone chilling. I love your description of Mary, I'm still shuddering thinking about it. Very well done. I liked that we were able to pick out each of the girls personalities, even with so few lines between them.

I have a few critiques though. There were a few spelling and grammar errors. Nothing major though.

Also, since Mary is from centuries ago, I think that it would have been better for you to use Old English when she was speaking. Not only would it be... (more)

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