Bad guys enter the fray, attack Sailor Moon, after she meets the new Senshi in class, and the portentous nightmares hint at a looming battle and a being sleeps inside her, unaware, Sailor Moon is caught up in a battle she knows nothing about. Will she survive?
Author's Comments:
This is a rewrite of the original which was written in 1997 by me. Edited by Loki, this is a series that is darker than the original.
You have a really great start here. Though, try to show more instead of telling so much. I feel like you tell us this happened, then this happened, etc. Try to work in some more description to draw your reader in.
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