General Library: Undying spirit by regie

Rating:PG Created:2009-03-29
Genre:General Updated:2009-03-29
Style:Character Study Status:Complete

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Even in the darkest of times, a spark of hope can flicker. A little Midori-centered vignette.

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Review by Loki 2009-04-08

I am unfamiliar with this fandom, but I am also intrigued.

I must say I am impressed with your vocabulary, I find reading this a rewarding experience.

I did however notice some minor flaws, but a good BETA or proof reading of your piece should correct and bring a polish to the text.

Over-all it was a wonderful insight and took us from the pit of dispair to the edge of hope, and I liked that.

The central character has warmth, potency and... (more)

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