General Library: Memoirs of a Teenage Rockstar by InukiTenchi

Rating:R Created:2009-04-03
Genre:Romance Updated:2009-05-27
Style:General Status:Incomplete
Setting:Alternate Universe

Prologue (PHP)
Butterflies and Blue Eyes (PHP)
So Much for a Normal Day (PHP)
Whirlwind of Emotions (PHP)


You know how some say, 'it all began in high school'? Well for Kagome Higurashi and her band, The Demonic Angels, it certainly did. This is their story.

Author's Comments:

Rated for future chapters containing violence and sensuality.

This is a complete re-write and redo of my old version of this story. I hope this version is better enjoyed. Thank you for reading, and please review. Your thoughts and opinions are greatly appreciated. Whether creative criticism or advice on how to make it better, all are welcome. =]

All characters belong to Rumiko Takahashi. I thank her for giving us such an enjoyable anime and manga.

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Review by Loki 2009-04-08

I thought this an interesting story, thus far you've set, dare I say, the stage rather well with the descriptions of the various characters and created mood and atmosphere.

I liked the humor and the dialogue was good.

Grammar pointers:

You tend to over use some words: 'bit' is littered through both chapters, try if you can to cut that down as it tends to jar and interrupt the flow of the story. you have a few repeat words and tag and the punctuation m... (more)

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