General Library: The Red Wall by amy

Fandom:Harry Potter
Rating:PG Created:2006-05-21
Genre:Dark Updated:2006-08-21
Style:General Status:Incomplete

The House (PHP)


After a horrible event, Peter Pettigrew faces a difficult decision--will he finally take responsibility for his mistakes or will he continue to blame everyone around him like he has for his entire life?

Author's Comments:

It's a fairly simple story which examines Peter's life before Harry's birth. I don't particularly sympathize with Peter or his actions which ultimately lead to the death of people who trusted him.

 Reviews: 2
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Review by Loki 2006-08-21

I really enjoyed this insightful little offering. I feel you have a great way of conveying a tale. But I did notice a few typos and minor structural flaws, not a real problem if you go over it carefully and give it a good proofing.

Your characterisation was great the way you got inside his head and drew the reader into his inner struggles. Highlighting the fact that fate and circumstance collaborate together to forge the finished product. Cleverly done! *hands you a crystal wand a... (more)
Review by Starsea 2006-05-22

Even though you say this is a simple story, I think it is a very thorough and engaging examination of Peter and his motivations. You bring his parents vividly to life, giving him a realistic psychological background. I really like how you show that he has no concept of right and wrong, all he thinks about is survival. He never has to face consequences, so you can see how desperate and afraid he would be when Sirius and Remus make him do that. It's also easy to see how he would be swayed by Volde... (more)

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