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General Library: Little Girls, Lost by blue
Fandom: | Sailormoon |
Rating: | PG13 |
Created: | 2006-06-19 |
Genre: | Dark |
Updated: | 2006-06-19 |
Style: | Character Study |
Status: | Complete |
Setting: | Alternate Universe |
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Summary:
Sailormoon will soon learn that the other side is not always so pretty and heroes are not always so lucky... The hard way.
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Author's Comments:
This is a what-if story, at the end of Sailormoon S Season.
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Review by Loki |
2006-08-21
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Wow, this is a fascinating story.
I noticed a lot of structural flaws, grammar, a lot of repetition of phrases and terms _babe_ could alternate with infant, child, etc, and some phrases -- but the narrative itself has a powerful sustained energy that could be developed much further. It is the kind of story that generates ideas and fresh -- plot bunnies -- it is haunting, immense in scale and its boundless isolation is post-modern in style.
I love the influences you ... (more) |
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Review by Starsea |
2006-07-08
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This was such a sad story, and cold, too. There was a lot of emotion, but it felt very impersonal, an echo of the empty surroundings and the dead system. I liked the backstory on the Tau system and Mistress 9. Hotaru creeped me out, but I suppose she wouldn't exactly grow up normal in a time bubble, would she? This is a bit of an oddity, interesting to read, but depressing. |
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