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General Library: A Little Violence by stormwalker628


Fandom:Sailormoon
Rating:PG Created:2006-01-06
Genre:Action Updated:2006-01-06
Style:General Status:Complete
Setting:Canon
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Summary:

The girls have a day off and Rei has some tickets to a park. So why do Ami and Makoto have guns?


Author's Comments:

This takes place in the SuperS season. I tried to write it as if it were an actual episode.


 Reviews: 4
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Review by Heavenly Pearl 2006-06-21

As a die-hard fan of the Dream Arc/SuperS season, it's great to find a fic taking place during it. This really does seem like it could easily fit into the SuperS anime as a missing episode. I do wish it wasn't quite so simplistic, though. For example, the Amazon Trio have a tendency to set up elaborate plans to get close to their victims before attacking. I realise Tigerseye wasn't exactly thrilled with the mission -- hehe, your Trio plays Rock, Scissors, Paper, too -- but it seemed like a bit o... (more)
Review by Kihin Ranno 2006-06-19

Yay SuperS piece with minimal Chibi Usa! :D

Ah-hem. Sorry. Anyway, I also enjoyed this humorous piece. A nice little “lost” scene from SuperS that I think would fit in nicely with the series. I think the characterization of all the girls was spot on. I was going to quibble that I didn’t think it was likely that Minako didn’t get a shot in. I would have expected her to shoot at everything that moves since Minako has a tendency to get… overstimulated, to put it mildl... (more)
Review by December 2006-06-09

I enjoyed this piece, espeically the humor very present in the beginning. For the most part, it really did read like an episode and that also made it accessable without a lot of additional explaining.

The one area where I was confused was actually in the beginning. At first I thought the first scene happened before the rest of the story, so halfway through I was confused when Ami said she hadn't done paintball before. If there is a way you could make clearer which parts are fla... (more)


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