General Library: Lie in the Bed I Make by aishuu

Fandom:Harry Potter
Rating:PG Created:2007-07-26
Genre:Drama Updated:2007-07-26
Style:General Status:Incomplete

The First Evening (PHP)


Neville during Deathly Hollows.

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Review by bubblygoo 2009-08-10

I liked how the text flowed and the emphasis on innocence. Snape's frog card made me laugh, since I can't imagine him gardening (though I can guess his favorite flower). Everyone was also nicely characterized.
Review by Bella*Luna 2007-07-30

That was a really great start. Exactly what I imagine Neville feeling when he returned to Hogwarts and Harry wasn't there. It is encouraging to see him standing for himself in an effort to keep following Harry. I look forward to the rest.

Good job ^.~


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