Review by Nephthys Moon |
2007-11-05
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I literally had tears coming out of my eyes reading this. Tears, I tell you. I was so grateful my husband wasn't at home - he would have thought I'd gone daft or something.
The story itself is a cliche, but done in such a hilarious manner that it is almost poking fun at the cliche, making it new again. Very impressive.
I did feel, though, that your characterization of Serena was a bit off in the beginning - forced, perhaps. However, it tied into the story well. Perh... (more) |
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