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Review by Loki |
2009-03-29
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What can I say, this was absolutely perfect in every way:
Your writing is superb, and what is more, charged with vitality, color and woven together in a tapestry of writing excellence that for the reader makes it stand out as an example of fabulous storytelling, structure, plot and image. I love your use of language and your grammar and plot are right on the money.
I also love the originality concerning her new relationship to her protector, gorgeous and affect amazing.
The piece has a credibility, style and flow that tells me that anything you write is gold, and I would suggest you are one of the best writers I have encountered over eight years of reading ficlets and in my top five.
Thank you and I urge you to write more!
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Author's response:
*blushes deeply* I am not certain I deserve such a wonderful comment. Yours is certainly the nicest in all the years that I have dabbled in fanfiction writing. Thank you, thank you, thank you for your compliments; they brightened my day especially after a long week. I will try to upload more of my writing here later.
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