Reviews on Wolf in Friend’s Clothing by AngelMoon Girl

Review by Loki 2009-10-26

I love reading Harry Potter fics. This one is an interesting insight into the behind the scenes and you did it justice.

Few knit pickings: some punctuation pairings and ly-adverbs, a bit too many. :) a little proofing to fix typos, but not too many.


I love your way with words, setting a scene and bringing the drama to the fore, you have it just right.

You have a great vocab, a couple of words were repeated, cosmetic.

The pace of the narritive was good, the world building excellent and the characterization of Dumbledore and how he would react, spot on.

In all a fabulous interpretation, and a real gem!

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