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Review by Loki |
2006-08-21
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Love and sadness and so beautiful
Firstly, you have a few structural and grammatical flaws to fix up. But those aside, this is a remarkably sweet-sad story.
I loved the emotional and sexual tension that ebbs and flows between two people of different worlds -- close, yet separated by the gulf of their respective domains. Your writing style here is fecund and fluid, sensual and chased, glorious in its visualisation and its rhythms. So tender as it draws upon the heart. Love and pathos dance about one another as their bitter-sweet love endures through its seemingly endless ttrials. But hope seems to linger somewhere beyond the moment, if only... Fantastic story telling and kudos to you! *hands you a golden crystal bloom and bows* L.
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