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Review by Bella*Luna |
2006-10-25
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That was adorable.
The thought of Mamoru having a snake is a good idea, but actually having a conversation with it to get his frustrations out, very amusing.
Great job.
I love the fangirls too! And the lawyer!
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Review by Loki |
2006-08-20
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Oh I remember reading this fabulous story on AI, under your other name ^_^
I loved it then -- I love it now! This is a story that is full of funny moments, and the cute pet snake, Fluffy, I love that! Great work! *hands you a golden crystal and a rose and bows* L.
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Review by Starsea |
2006-07-09
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This is one of my favourite comedy BSSM stories. Apart from the idea of calling a snake "Fluffy", what makes me laugh the most is the idea of Tuxedo Kamen groupies. It's all too plausible and you don't skimp on the gruesome details! Yet despite all the misfortunes of his day, Mamoru can't remain down when he hears Usagi's voice and her proposal, which is rather funny in itself. The last sentence is a perfect ending for this light, funny account of Mamoru's daily life.
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Review by stormwalker628 |
2006-03-19
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This was a cute piece. Very good story flow from one scene to the next.
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Review by ruminant |
2006-01-12
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What a cute story! Poor Mamo-chan! I love the fangirls and the snake was fun. It's nice how, in the end, it turned out to be a good day because of Usagi.
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Review by Dejana Talis |
2005-11-14
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Hee! This story is full of amusing moments and priceless lines, from "Queen Odango the First" to "Grenades would have suited me just fine..." It's really refreshing to see a view of the problems Mamoru has as a secret superhero, focused on him from beginning to end. I especially like the part where he complains about the still-mysterious Earth powers.
The only thing I found amiss was the snake. While a cool idea, it was a little hard to imagine Mamoru as a snake person, and moreso to imagine Usagi happily taking a snake home. Still, it was cute, and really who's to say that they don't like snakes? A little deviance from the norm is rarely a bad thing, especially when presented in such an amusing way. Nice work. ^^
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