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Review by blue 2006-01-10

Well, believe it or not, despite what others may think, this is, by far, my favorite of all your shorts. I loved it because from my perspective, it was a great ambiguous story that stretches the possibility just slightly. Sometimes, even if we think we know someone else to the point that we can anticipate everything that they do, they could still surprise us, even if the logic behind what may seem like a "betrayal" to the rest of the world, to them is not.

I liked the style, it fitted the the conflict, and I liked how it ended. So, personally, it's a nice twist full of cleverness and that thing that's even better, wickedness.

Oh, so wicked!

Loved it! (x3)

^_^v

Author's response:

Suhweeet.

See, that was the point; ambiguity. Was Neptune doing it out of respect for the memory of her promise at the end, or simply because she could for herself? The world may never know. Mwahaha.


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