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Review by Loki |
2008-04-15
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I can imagine that all mothers feel this way while carrying a new life and it would be special for Luna as well, a very real and moving POV of lovely Luna, and you presented her extremely well, well done Lady Araya-chan! *hands you a plushy Luna and Artemis and baby Diana kitty, a rose and bows* =^_^=
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Author's response:
This was my first ever piece that I felt comfortable writing and looking back on it now, I am just as proud of it as when I first wrote it. (I may go back and fix some things but that is beside the point =P)
Thank you Loki! You're the best!
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Review by Bella*Luna |
2006-09-26
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My favorite thing about this story is the fact that, while it is in the third person, as I'm reading it feel like I am Luna, sitting there second guessing myself and my ability to protect this small creature growing inside of me.
I can see myself sitting in a rocking chair, exhausted from lack of sleeping, watching the sun go down and the moon rise, asking the stars for guidance, and then realizing that it was going to work out the way that it was going to work out and understanding that doing my best was all there was that I could do.
I really liked it. Very well written. Great job.
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