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Review by Araya 2006-10-24

I love the song at the end. It really does justice for the story. And a beautiful story it truly is. I would have liked for you to dwell more upon Cosmo's feelings and that of Lady Serenity. I just feel that more should have come from that. Nonetheless, it was a beautiful and well written story. Keep up the good work!
Review by Bella*Luna 2006-10-23

Well, I liked it.

It is a great take on what she would feel like, being all alone.

I love the fact that you had Usagi come to take her place when it was her time.

It might have been good to have some sort of reuniting scene, little, but there....that is if your intention was to allow her passage to Elysian. I would like to think that she ends up there one day. I mean, her mother died right...she is at peace.

It is great, thought provoking piece. Well written and followed up with nice lyrics from a fitting song.


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