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Review by Anonymous 2009-12-11

\"That’s when he sees her, and he finds something else to fear.\"
LOL, yeah, I\'m sure Rei was thrilled to find Jadeite visiting her temple because he\'s afraid of fire. XD
Review by Bella*Luna 2007-01-02

I'm confused...are they talking about themselves, each other, or is it not them talking at all, is it someone else telling what their worst fears are?

Author's response:

I definitely did not get this alert (or I accidentally deleted it too quickly) or I would have PMd you or something (as I only just now figured out you can comment on vignettes. I am just not bright.)

Nobody's talking. It's just narrative, so it's the "unnamed/unseen narrator" saying what their fears are.


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