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Review by Jessica Pendragon |
2007-04-18
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Alright I'm back. w00t!
I got a deep thought out of this...and I don't have them often, so run with me.
We all have places to hide from what makes us agitated and afraid, but are we really hiding? Like...Nephrite goes there, but I think deep down he knows it's a place Makoto would LOVE because of the waterfall, and he goes there to get away but it reminds him of her anyways because it's what he wants the most. Does that make sense? Anyways, that's what I got out of it, besides being awesomely love-angsty. ;)
And I liked this quote: "Makoto wasn’t even flirting and he felt like she was his opposing magnet. The east to his west." So maybe opposite's attract is a common thing but I just liked how you said it. :)
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Author's response:
Oh yes, part of its attraction is that it's a place that reminds him of Makoto, it's a place she would love. But that's all subconscious and he doesn't acknowledge it, haha.
Yay, you liked the symbolism! I love putting in things like that seeing if people will notice them.
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