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Review by Jessica Pendragon |
2007-04-18
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I just find it completely ironic Minako is giving advice in such a way in this. But that was probably the point, huh? hehe. And planning a sugar bowl for DIABETES?! She's insane. But this isn't about her, so moving on...
I like how they're progressing from Dry Spell. Some authors keep everything the same and such, you know? But you have real life in mind and well, that's why I love your stories so much anyhow. ;) Mako knows what she wants, and she's being stubborn as always, but she's also changing too.
One nit-pic thing...you used 'roses in her cheeks' in Sylvan Reverie. I mean, obviously it's an awesome phrase, but I just noticed it was like having the same phrase in the same story since I read them all together. I hope...that makes sense.
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Author's response:
I used the same phrase? I didn't even realise! Thanks for pointing it out. I'm glad you noticed the progress - I think that's important when you're writing about a relationship. A relationship has to develop in some way, if it stagnates, it dies.
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