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Review by Bella*Luna |
2007-05-29
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That was adorable. I teared up at the end! Very cute, very strong ending.
Formatting and technical issues, but its fanfiction right? You're supposed to have fun with it.
I wanna say the ending was quick, but I think that it was just because I read it fast; going back over it in my head, it doesn't feel rushed at all. The story flows very well with itself, the characters are very synched with canon, you didn't write Luna and Artemis in but, to each their own right?
Over all, really good job. I liked it. ^.~
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