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General Library: But It’s Only Midnight by vegetasbubble


Fandom:Crossover (Sailormoon - Other)
Rating:PG Created:2009-09-01
Genre:Romance Updated:2009-09-01
Style:General Status:Complete
Setting:Alternate Universe
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Summary:

While at a party celebrating the mid year, Minako meets a boy with lavander hair that is very mysterious but won't give her a moment to talk... Minako x Trunks


Author's Comments:

This actually took a lot of skill to write mainly because I have never written this pairing and they are so out of my comfort zone. This story is pretty much AU so no Sailor Moon or any of that. Itís the only way that I could make this work. Written for Round 1 of the sm_fanswap


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Review by Loki 2009-09-09

Good start. I think you have good world building and imagery, I like how you describe Minako's movements and dress, dialogue is good. Characterization was also enjoyable.

I was a little confused by Matako Vs Makoto, are these two different characters? I had to ask. ^^

I think the drama added with the guys in the street was well portrayed.

Knit picks:

There were a few spelling and grammar flaws, nothing fatal, careful of using too much e... (more)


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